Hello Mahina, It is great to see you are plowing through these activities at such a high standard. It is great to hear that your great great grandpa was really brave. I also really like how you added some photos of him. Another specific thing I like is the back round. It fits the theme. If I was in the war I would be terrified. The thing that scares me is that if I am old enough then I have to go to war and I am, so scared of death. Maybe next time you could add some back story to the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Hello Mahina,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you are plowing through these activities at such a high standard. It is great to hear that your great great grandpa was really brave. I also really like how you added some photos of him. Another specific thing I like is the back round. It fits the theme. If I was in the war I would be terrified. The thing that scares me is that if I am old enough then I have to go to war and I am, so scared of death. Maybe next time you could add some back story to the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
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Kia Ora Mahina,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing about someone you know that is brave, I think it is so awesome that your granddad was a soldier who fought in the war.
Could you please share a little bit more information about him, what he did maybe 2-3 more sentences to gain full points for this activity.
Ka kite ano,
Kueni :)