Hello Mahina, It is nice to read your blog posts. I hope you are enjoying the rest of the Summer Learning Journey because it is ending really soon. I really enjoyed reading this blog post! Let me explain why I like it. Firstly, you added a colourful back round. Secondly, you added lots of information about both of these amazing pilots. I never want to go on a plane again. The reason being I have heard and watched many videos of bad things happening to planes, but if I want to be famous then I have to travel the globe. Maybe next time you could add a small outro to your blog post! Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Thank you for completing Activity one for Week 1, Day 2. I really enjoyed reading the venn diagram you have made for your blog post today about two famous aviators - Jean Batten and Amelia Earhart.
I like that you have edited, designed and styled your venn diagram yourself. I like the detail you have added - with the different fonts, and the pictures you have included of the two amazing women! I really like that you have read through the information on the activity and placed them accordingly into your venn diagram, ka pai!
These amazing ladies, travelled to many countries around the world. Where in the world would you want to travel to, if you could go anywhere in the world?
Hello Mahina,
ReplyDeleteIt is nice to read your blog posts. I hope you are enjoying the rest of the Summer Learning Journey because it is ending really soon. I really enjoyed reading this blog post! Let me explain why I like it. Firstly, you added a colourful back round. Secondly, you added lots of information about both of these amazing pilots. I never want to go on a plane again. The reason being I have heard and watched many videos of bad things happening to planes, but if I want to be famous then I have to travel the globe. Maybe next time you could add a small outro to your blog post! Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag
Tena Koe Mahina,
ReplyDeleteThank you for completing Activity one for Week 1, Day 2. I really enjoyed reading the venn diagram you have made for your blog post today about two famous aviators - Jean Batten and Amelia Earhart.
I like that you have edited, designed and styled your venn diagram yourself. I like the detail you have added - with the different fonts, and the pictures you have included of the two amazing women! I really like that you have read through the information on the activity and placed them accordingly into your venn diagram, ka pai!
These amazing ladies, travelled to many countries around the world. Where in the world would you want to travel to, if you could go anywhere in the world?
Nga Mihi,
Kueni :)